A little detail that I didn't notice till I went back and looked over the book again was how coat button thing on Rorschoch's left shoulder is unbuttoned. Small detail, but they did it.
motor burnout on miniguns is common among young upstarts .. as a joke you should have given him a blue bit of cardboard and said" it's viagra for your flacid weapon"
looking at my gun of doom i notice the barrels have been effected by gravity... gravity i say.. nothing else.. purely gravity and the lack of targets too shoot.......
gravity i say.. nothing else.. purely gravity and the lack of targets too shoot....... 
... damn you and your superior technology.... 
