November 14th, 2009

Chapter 80

Ok, it took a lot more work than I thought it would to get it ready to go up, and I changed a lot in the last couple of days. So much of it hasn't been edited. So you'll have to tolerate some typos, but fuck all that. Here it is.

Chapter 80: On the Subject of Frying Pans and Fires

As usual, if you haven't, make sure you read the previous two chapters first:
Chapter 78: Cobain Rules
Chapter 79: Super Pervert Powers, Activate!

And leave comments, even if they're just to say, "This sucks,and I hate you for taking so long to post something that sucks so much." Whatever. Read and comment. That's the main thing. Oh, and enjoy. I guess that's important too.

Posted 2 months ago by datalaughing Comments (7)	+ 8 Cool

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CapDac

Adventurer

#1 Posted 2 months ago	[ Reply ] [ Quote ]
Very nice, very nice! Celtic singing in the shower was a nice touch Looking forward to the next one - it feels good to finally see this universe again

megafire

Chess Master

#2 Posted 2 months ago	[ Reply ] [ Quote ]
Loved it, absolutely loved it/ Damnit, Data is one hell of a magnificent bastard.

SpiderWolve

Lord Fluffy

#3 Posted 2 months ago	[ Reply ] [ Quote ]
Will read tomorrow when I get off duty, barring I don't get caught up in my own writing and playing MW2.

jedipoet

FuckThatGuy

#4 Posted 2 months ago	[ Reply ] [ Quote ]
i love it when a plan comes together. love the watchman reference. love the bee shooting dogs. awesome. can't wait to see how this finishes.

EagleMan

BSc BEd

#5 Posted 2 months ago	[ Reply ] [ Quote ]
Excellent! Can't wait for the rest.

SharpAsATack

Yay Me

#6 Posted 2 months ago	[ Reply ] [ Quote ]
Great stuff sir. A few small bits I found odd here and there, but all just opinion that aren't important to the story, which is very intriguing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

jedipoet

FuckThatGuy

#7 Posted 2 months ago	[ Reply ] [ Quote ]
is the new chapter coming out today?

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